Writing Example

I wanna thank Aramay for letting me use this piece from our RP as an example!



Monique felt her cheeks starts to blush as Ace came over for a passionate kiss. It was just what she needed to stop and think. Though it felt like her heart stopped beating for a moment. She nodded at his words."Yeah you're right."She pointed out. The red haired woman closed her eyes as she tried her best to focus. She did it rather well. Then her mind got a bit side tracked as she heard the sound of the sea. Made her actually want to bath in it. She missed the feeling of being able to bath in the sea. Suddenly she actived a Spatial Manipulation and she walked into a portal that appeared which ended a few meters away from the ship out in the sea making her fall right into the water. She let out a scream before she fell in. But she wasn't drowning just sinking.... She cursed in anger under the water the bubbles that came up showing where she had fallen. Echo who had watched them where now laughing his ass off at the scene along side his uncle.
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Yamato gave Rin an unamused and annoyed look after hearing his comment. They start to wait and she too starts to get bored aswell."Get me something to drink."She said and looked at him. He had to obey being her boyfriend and first mate he had no chose. Soon enough people started to arrive and she quickly got excited. Seeing the line growing she had an idea."Okay since there are that many who wants to join. I suggest we pick out those who we like in different catagories. Swordsmen, Cook, Doctors yknow. Then we have a second interview for them later where we pick out those who we think are best fit of joining our crew."She suggested.