Bank Robbery starter

Males only please. Can be violent, fantasy, supernatural, kidnap/hostage, whatever else you can think of. Please be descriptive and it would be nice if you have good grammar. 24/F/UK.
Character appearance;
Height: 5ft 2
Hair: Reaching just past her shoulders in a neat enough straight cut that naturally waves and curls a little, just enough to be annoying and required wrangling each morning. Usually tied up in a messy bun, ponytail or plaits. Dark blue in colour, recently dyed.
Body: Curvy in build and in shape from running and exercise, with sizeable breasts and a good sized ass to go with them. Her skin, barring a few freckles when the sun comes out, is pale. Paler than most.

Piercings/Scars/Tattoos etc: A dark purple rose with music notes as the stem snakes it's way up her right arm from her wrist. She has a small scar on her chin, from a mirror breaking in a bathroom in her late teens, and several marks on her wrists. Some are various scars from owning two cats, others are straighter and more... deliberate looking if you understand but they are from years ago and whilst she covers them with jewellery, she is by no means ashamed. It’s just easier and people don’t judge or ask or get offended or upset.
Wearing a pair of black skinny jeans, battered black converse with a flatteringly tight band t-shirt and leather jacket.

Scenario: Having recently moved in with her brother as her dad has been struggling with alcoholism and has finally gone into rehab, Elrose had been in the town a few weeks and was starting to like it and to settle into a rhythm. Not having to worry about where her father was and if he was all right every second of every day. Being able to go to university to study music and actually concentrate. She hadn't made very many friends yet but people knew her face now and she'd been to a party or two. On her way home from uni, she decided to run into the bank on a Thursday night to get money to pay her brother back for money he lent her. Joining the queue, the girl put in her headphones, beginning to tap on my leg absentmindedly while she waited. Suddenly three men ran into the lobby, carrying guns and bags. "Everybody on the floor!" one yells, waving his gun in the air. El dropped to the ground with everyone else, shaking, her breath caught in her throat and her eyes wide.

(If you continue on from here, playing one of the robbers, we'll see where we go!)